2014年5月30日星期五

twitter summary as group





Twitter Summary
narrative: our story is happened in a hash restaurant called Hash Brown which aims to makes special hash to every person. It is a small family restaurant but very sweet with full of love. Every customer come to our restaurant bring their own story and then create new stories with having delicious hash. In the twitter, Hash restaurant introduces the new kind of food every day and teach audience how to cook them. We call for a vote for asking audience’s opinion about whether it’s safe to travel abroad by airline after the MH370 missing. We also arrange an activity in twitter which is “call for stories”. We encourage everyone to talk about their own story under this hashtag, in that case we get our characters stories.

Tweets: 99
Followers: 217
Following: 173

11 Hashtag we used are these:
#honeymoon
#Love story
#trysomethingnew
#Chinesefood
#dumpling
#GiveBackAmanda
#HalfPriceTheSecondOne
#CallForStories
#GotoMalaysia
#GiftToMom
#MH370

The number of media we used:
Blog:1
Vlog: 3
Picture: 17

Jenny Gaga: she is a crazy hash lover who comes to Hash restaurant to have delicious food every day. She is a lovely woman with full energy in her life. When she first came to Hash restaurant, she was sad and head broken, because she found her boyfriend fall in love with her best friend. She want to get tasty food to comfort herself. She get into the Hash restaurant and fall in love with the chief in Hash Brown called Charlie Brown. She thinks Hash can give her energy and hope to start her new life, and the one who can cook such delicious food can accompany her forever.

Charlie Brown: He is the best chief in the Hash restaurant who can cook great delicious food for each costumer. He is also the elder son of owner who is very shy but care others very much.  He falls in love with Jenny gaga at the first sight. He uses fantastic food to touch Jenny’s heart and finally get married. He tries to cook Chinese food dumpling the first time for Jenny and ask marriage to her. This is a love story happen in this twitter narrative.

Ivan Whitton: He is a travel enthusiast who has traveled to many countries and tried many different cuisines of the world. He is a customer of hash restaurant and then falls in love with a new cooker Laura who works in the restaurant.

Laura Fick Chwe: She was a painter before, but now, she is a cook in Hash Brown. When she was young, her mom always cooked hash for him. She really liked it because it always gave her the sense that her mom was be with her. By the way, her mom is a hash cook who works in a Chinese restaurant. She was interested in painting and really worked hard to learn how to draw. However, her mom asked her to be a hash cook. She ran away from home for nearly ten years. Her mom had a big sick during that ten years then she realized her mistake and came back. After she sharing this story in Hash Brown’s tweet, the boss asks her to work in his restaurant. During the experience working in Hash Brown, she meets Ivan and falls in love with him.

Emma Prince: He is a twitter robot who employed by competitor restaurant

Conflict1 : In our narrative story, we use twitter bots to make mistake our hash products for drug to make the conflict between our restaurant and customers. Firstly, Hash restaurant said the hash is so delicious and on one can get rid of it. He loves it so much. Everyone will be addicted to it if they come to have a try. Then the twitter bot which is employed by our competitor restaurant makes a command that "Oh my god! People eat hash, the drug, in that restaurant. It is illegal! We cannot eat in that restaurant at all!" It will make a conflict because our competitor wants to slander our restaurant. People may talk about “Is our restaurant illegal? Should people stay away from our restaurant?” in that case, we, as the boss of the restaurant, face a big rumor and need to fight for our reputation and legalization.

Conflict2: Laura cooks hash for Ivan, but he does not like it. Actually, Laura uses her mom’s way to cook it and she believes it is the best hash, so she feels very mad about his dislike. Laura sends a tweet to vent anger. Out of her surprise, Ivan finally comforts her. Finally, they become good friends. Laura sends her painting to Ivan and Ivan shares photo with her. 

2014年5月28日星期三

the final twitter summary for individual



As individual summary :
     During the process of our twitter narrative, I face a lot of difficulties and gain a lot of experience for solving the problem. I learn a lot on how to use effective media to attract followers. The narrative surprise me most is that I need to post every day to make up a story. At the beginning, I always confuse about how to continue my own story by post things, because I forget what to say the day after I post words. Then I write my story line together. I image what word I will say to help my story become more attractive and write down like a fiction. In that case, it’s clear for me to finish my story.
     The moment I most pride is that I find a twitter account in foreign famous for introducing food follow our restaurant twitter account and retweet our posting one day. I feel so excited and happy that our information is read by others. I just think our work is worthy that the famous food twitter account confirming us.
    I think the hashtag is the most useful for our twitter narrative. Because the adding hashtag can push our twitter to publish and increase possibility to let more people read our narrative. We can also find other interesting things through search for hashtag. The media I enjoy the most is the vlog. It’s a really interesting thing to make a video by imitating other. Our vlog is acting like a MV called “love story” by Taylor Swift to give an ending of our love story of twitter narrative. We acting like Taylor did in her MV and using lip thinking to “sing” her song. It’s an amazing experience to make this funny video.
    I think the least useful media is the twitter bot. because it is hard to make up a story for using twitter bot and I feel few people will believe the twitter bot. the least enjoyable experience for is also the twitter bot. I think a lot to make up a most realistic story by using twitter bot. In our narrative story, we use twitter bots to make mistake our hash products for drug to make the conflict between our restaurant and customers. Firstly, Hash restaurant said the hash is so delicious and on one can get rid of it. He loves it so much. Everyone will be addicted to it if they come to have a try. Then the twitter bot which is employed by our competitor restaurant makes a command that "Oh my god! People eat hash, the drug, in that restaurant. It is illegal!” in that case it will appeal a conflict successful.
    The point I want to change is that the story of each character need to improve. Because of time limiting, many aspects of our narrative did not offered completely. If we have more time, we will add more details about our twitter narrative and show more conflicts between characters. Next time, I will focus more on story structure to think a full more complete story with matching picture next time. The other part I will improve is that I want to think up more creative idea and attract more followers for our narrative.
    I want to suggest that professor should not regard the numbers of followers as an important criterion for grading of our twitter project. Because in some case, the number of flowers cannot measure our grade effectively and completely, maybe someone works harder and put much more attention to this project but they do not get the most followers. It will be unfair. At last, I really learn a lot about technical media and touch many new kind of platform for getting knowledge. Thank you so much for guiding me this semester.



2014年5月19日星期一

three topic for final present

1. how to find Aline in the universe
2. the missing airplane is just travel through time
3. how to win in the dating show

2014年5月12日星期一

node in essay from other class


Cinderella’s Sister
      Bella, a fifteen year old girl, has a long curly hair with big eyes. Her eyes shining like the most twinkling start in the sky. Everyone is enjoying talking with Bella for her gorgeous and special eyes which seems to be talking to others.
     Bella not only has a charming appearance but also a great father, Bill Barber, who almost dote her deeply. Her father owns a company of department stores. Mr. Barber regards his wife’s died of illness as his fault because of the busy business trade. In that cause, he put all his love into Bella’s life. Bella has thousands and hundreds countless beautiful clothes in her wardrobe. In other world, she never dresses the same clothes for many years. She has a full-time driver who can take her school every day. She has less pressure on the study. Even if she get low grade, her father never blame her just conger her “looking forward your next time can be better”. What’s her favorite is that she has a huge water bed. She is found of making every strange pose lying on the bed. However, the most let her friends envy thing is that Bella has a handsome and outstand two-year older “brother”, Neil, who appears in every girl’s dream. What’s more, Neil, living in neighbor, has been accompanying Bella almost her whole life because of her father lacking of time for being with her. They spend the happiest and saddest time with each other. Bella relies on her “brother” deeply by sharing her feeling. She doesn’t have so much confusing time to complain her life because there is nothing to complain. When she broke up with her boyfriend, she felt so sad with tears to find Neil.
“Why Sam be with jenny? I hate jenny.” Bella stared at the bookshelf so Neil can’t tell her expression.
“Jenny neither. She told me.” Neil walked to bookshelf take an outsider and opened it in a casual way.
“I can’t stand her. Why must her? Sam has lunch with her every day in front of me.” said with her eyes casting down.
“They will never get together.”
“Why? ... Because jenny expresses herself to you, right?” Bella turned around immediately and looked at her “brother” sitting in front of the window.
Neil was reading in silent without answer.
“Ha-ha, poor Sam.” Her big eyes reappeared energy. She smiled “let me think what we would have for dinner.”
Bella is pure like a lotus flower. Nothing bad influences her life. In one word, Bella is totally a princess.
One day, when her father took a kind woman and a girl in front of her and told her she will have a new mother and sister from now on, she is never that little princess any more.
Bill takes a 2 year-older girl with short hair and said to Bella “My girl, this is Carrie, do you feel excited that you have a sister to life with you?” Bella look at that girl who stands in backlighting, the sunshine is too bright to make her eyes open to so she never remember Carrie’s expression at that time which also cover that girl as her body is plated on the golden light. “Angel?” she just blurts out what she thinking about. Then she rushed to huge her new sister saying loudly “Nice to meet you, my angel sister!” However, Carrie just get rid of her arms and come into her room. Bella follow her and show her cute toys.
“This is my favorite teddy, his name is Mike. Do you think it is so lovely?”
“I don’t like toys” Carries says arranging her luggage without giving her one eye.
“I have much pretty clothes. We can share with each other. I dream having a sister to change clothes.”
“I don’t like your pink clothes.” Carries finish putting her clothes into a drawer.
“Do you like comic? I have the last NANA if you want……”
“I don’t.”
“All right, tomorrow morning my driver can take us to school together. You must be not familiar with the new school.”
“I prefer going on foot.” Carries stand by the opening door and stare at Bella impatiently.
Bella Shrugs her shoulder walking toward to leave with “welcome to my home!”
After few mouths, Bella totally feel that Carrie don’t like her and her family. No matter she does what to get close to Carrie, she always gets the cold rejection. She can’t get into Carrie’s world.
Bella can’t image what Carrie experience in her childhood. Carrie’s mother had married to a lot of man. Since Carrie had the memory, she wanders around and transfers from one school to another. Because she gets used to fickleness of worldly relationship between human, she never trust anyone and is not willing to treat others politely. She doesn’t need friend and family and always with a look of indifference.
The appearing of Carrie is just like a mirror which reflects Bella’s bad sides. They are entirely different. When she hangs out with friend shopping or having afternoon tea, Carrie just stay at home read books alone. When she hide the transcript with “C” in the bottom of her drawer, Carrie’s report with all “A” makes her father laugh loudly and heartily. When she throws a tantrum to her father for asking a last Prada handbag, Carrie pays all her tuition herself by doing several part time jobs. She find Carrie not only loot the love of her father, but also steal her brother. She can understand them no matter the Kundera, Kafka, and Camus what they are talking about or Capital or the root of financial crisis. Neil has fewer and fewer time to listen her mind. He seems prefer to spending time with Carrie.
Bella never feel so deep upset. The whole world changes after Carrie come. Everything never comes back. Bella don’t know when she begins to hate Carrie who take place of her and enjoy what should be belonged to her. She even decides to revenge. She cries for Carrie’s unfriendly treatment to her father. She begins to say bad things of Carrie to her friends. Whatever Carries does can be exaggerated embellishment to treat bad for her. Everyone hears about it express the sympathy to Bella because she is the poor Cinderella and spreads the rumor around the school. Because of the bad relationship with other or the strong influence from jealous or the affairs of ambiguity with Neil, no one likes Carrie, no one treat her friendly. People hate her as the sister of Cinderella. However, Carrie does not care anything. She just does what she did. Only Neil stays with her as usual or even gets closer. Carrie is that kind of person, nothing influent her.
As time pass by, 10 years later, Bella becomes more beautiful, she still have more new clothes than she needs and a large sum of expensive handbags. She knows how to use make up to make her look wonderful. Her big eyes, covering with strong eye lines, heavy eye shadow and dense mascara, is already no longer shining as before and they lost the ability of talking to others. She does not have stable job. What she does every day is dating with different guys.
After 4 years studying in Harvard University by majoring MBA, Carrie takes over the department company from Bill gradually. Now she has a black straight long hair still with an apathetic. Few mouths ago, she just betrothed herself to Neil who manages his own company successfully. Every one admires her, because she becomes a powerful woman and gets harvest in both cause and love.
Today, Carrie is asked to accompany Bella joining the competition of ballet. Bella have been learning ballet for several years, but she never gets any prize. Neither did this time. On the way home in the car driven by Carrie, Bella cries heavily like a tap which is pushed the never stop button by someone. The radio is playing dying in the sun by The Cranberries. The used tissues is everywhere in the car.
Carrie frowns impatiently and turns off the radio player. “When will you going to finish?”
“I ……just can’t control. Why god doesn’t give me just one time get the prize?” Bella looks at the view outside the window.
“You really want to know?”
“Tell me.”
“Look at your feet. That is not the foot of ballet player. You’d better to have a look at the foot of real ballet player.”
“What’s wrong with my feet?”
“Every professional ballet player must have a pair of feet with out of shape seriously. That’s the result of exercising and a stand great pain from feet thousands and hundreds days by days. Obviously you are afraid of the pain.” Carrie says in flat voice.
Bella suddenly turn to Carrie looking at her eyes in shocked. Then she keeps in silent for a longtime with staring at her tiptoe which covered by the new Dior stiletto heels in season. That pair of shoes is advertised as the crystal shoes of Cinderella.
 “You know? I hate you for a long time.” Bella break up the silence. “You are so brilliant. No one see me. Dad loves you. Neil loves you. Everyone loves you. I am the redundant one.” She gulps down a sob as muttering to herself.
“Me neither. You regard yourself as the Cinderella but you are a loser in my mind.” Carrie stops the car for waiting the red light and turn to Bella. “You never know hard working is the necessary path to the success. What you only do is getting something in nothing. I know you like Neil actually, but you do nothing.”
“I try……but……I can’t finish anything.” Bella starts to cry again. Tears wash her make up as dropping down two She thought she was the poorest one in the world. Now she realizes she just cheat herself. Carrie is just the excuse for her to escape the challenge in her life. She is afraid to endure hardship.
The music restarts to play. Carrie concentrates on driving again like no one talking just now.
Bella stops her tears and stares at the quick passing scenery outside the window. Her shining eyes come back. She know that it’s not too late to start relearning ballet.

using vlog in our narritive


We will use vlog posting in our twitter about the new of missing flight MH370. This vlog is post for attracting other followers to know what’s going on in current. It gives the background for our narrative. When the couple having hush in our restaurant watches this volg, they feel worry about their daughter who travels around the world. They  afraid about whether they should go abroad by airplane. This volg can attract audience vote for whether it is safe to take airplane abroad. They will give responds to our narrative.
We can also post an funny volg about our chief cooking hush in our restaurant kitchen to make an advertisement. The funny vlog with crazy music can help our twitter get more followers.

2014年5月7日星期三

How can you use different kinds of media to create a layered narrative in your Twitter narrative?



In class, we learn a good example of using different kinds of media to create a story to get more audience attention. In the story “war in world”, it contains broadcast, audio and print to make the story more believable.
As for our own group twitter narrative, we can also use these kinds of media together to get other’s attention. What I want to put in our narrative are visual, audio and print. In our story, the old couple is arguing about whether they should go abroad for traveling after the missing of airline MH370 when they have hush in our restaurant. We can put the audio a new about missing of MH370 to make audience felling more concern to this event. They will know more detail about the event to believe our narrative. We can also use images and text about our hush food and the old couple on our twitter. Using these two media can not only advertising our restaurant to attract followers, but also make our narrative more real. These medias help our narrative more reliable and interesting. 

MY Inforgraphic

Here is my inforgraphic about how we generate our own happiness by brain.
the picture source is from  Rob Vargas
http://speckyboy.com/2010/11/12/12-inspirationally-designed-infographics-for-designers/